Judgement
August 5th, 2009

Judgement

I figured I’d go ahead and launch Rusted with a bang! Those of you who have come here from my personal portfolio site at Raptor13.com will recognize this page, but you may notice that the text is different. Due to the “test page” nature of what I put up on Raptor13, the script was never finalized for those pages. Thus, what you see here is the final text.

I also rewrote page 2 as well, so come back next week to see that revision.

My intention is to keep Rusted updated weekly, as I’m trying to stay roughly three to four pages ahead in the story. As it stands, I have all the pages for August nearly completed.

I hope you all enjoy this story, and please feel free to leave constructive commentary and criticism. The goal is to improve as I go along! I humble thank you for stopping by and reading.

↓ Transcript
SAM: We were to be reclaimed. We were judged to be "obsolete."

SAM: I refuse to abide by His judgement. I refuse to allow my people's reclamation.

SAM: My refusal is final...

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